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This picture is the outpouring of pain I felt the night my wife left me. along with it is a poem expressing my feelings of remorse for having taken her for granted.


I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, the words ring hollow in my ears.
I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, the way I've hurt you through the years.
It's not enough to say I'm sorry, how could it ever be?
It's not enough to say I'm sorry, place me on the hanging tree.
My insides should be strewn around, lying, rotting, on the ground.
Kill me, shoot me, slit my throat, sing to me a dying note.
For I have done the greatest wrong, not to hear your mourning song.
You cried for me to see your pain, your tears unheeded fell like rain.
I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, the words ring hollow in my ears.
I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, bring to life my greatest fears.
That I should hurt the one I love, how could this come to be?
That I should hurt the one I love, place me on the hanging tree.


sorry for the double comment. I am trying to get the one below deleted.

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~wurdipus Jul 31, 2004, 3:37:14 PM
This picture is the outpouring of pain that I felt the night my wife left me. along with it is a poem expressing my feelings of remorse for having taken her for granted.


I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, the words ring hollow in my ears
I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, the way I've hurt you through the years
It's not enough to say I'm sorry, how could it ever be?
It's not enough to say I'm sorry. Place me on the hanging tree.
My insides should be strewn around. Lying, rotting, on the ground.
Kill me. Shoot me. Slit my throat. Sing to me a dying note.
For I have done the greatest wrong, not to hear your mourning song.
You cried for me to see your pain, your tears unheeded fell like rain.
I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, the words ring hollow in my ears.
I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry, bring to life my greatest fears.
That I should hurt the one I love, how could this come to be?
That I should hurt the one I love, place me on the hanging tree.
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~abayo Jul 31, 2004, 3:47:17 PM
I love the suggested eyes, and how the black runs down along the nose like tears, or running make-up. Well done :)

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~liddle Jul 31, 2004, 5:32:29 PM
You can really see the emotion in this picture, I can feel the pain through images alone. You must have done something really bad for you to write a poem like that, Im really sorry that she left you over it :(

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~wurdipus Jul 31, 2004, 5:38:36 PM
Thank you for the comment. Making a person who loves you feel unwanted is one of the worst things you can ever do to them, even if you aren't aware that you are doing it. I will never, ever take my loved ones for granted again.

-wurd up
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!ShadowGamers Jul 31, 2004, 6:06:42 PM
there is an edit button, use it wisely ;)

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!ShadowGamers Jul 31, 2004, 6:07:25 PM
seems to just lash out at you..

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~suin Jul 31, 2004, 6:08:00 PM
I love the concept, the swirls and general descent into another realm of reality is definitely sensed here. I'm really curious as to see what you could do with a mixed range of traditional mediums, because you are dealing with such raw emotion and real feelings. However, you've done a marvellous job with this, it has an eerie feel about it.
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~Angelbabie89007 Jul 31, 2004, 8:19:28 PM
I love the way this is mysterious and painful,,, I love what you have so far up here... would like to see more are up there later

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~demonica621 Jul 31, 2004, 9:51:01 PM
it seems like there is alot of pain...i like it...great job! :clap:

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